It is very impressive that you did review of class very well

You understand the structure of  palaces in Joseon dynasty.

Then you organized each sentence cleary, so readers can read your paragraph.

Therefore I enorage you to study hard and to write your opinion about the class

But just one thing !

You need to change 'Dong-gure'  to 'Dong-gwol' and 'Su-gur' to 'Seo-gwol'   !

If you change these two things, your essay is just perfect!

once again, Thank you for your essay and Good Job ! :)

Hello, Dayeon  !

Thank you for your great essay :)

It is very impressive that you did review of class very well

You understand the structure of  palaces in Joseon dynasty.

Then you organized each sentence cleary, so readers can read your paragraph.

Therefore I enorage you to study hard and to write your opinion about the class

But just one thing !

You need to change 'Dong-gure'  to 'Dong-gwol' and 'Su-gur' to 'Seo-gwol'   !

If you change these two things, your essay is just perfect!

once again, Thank you for your essay and Good Job ! :)