Thank you for the detailed presentation on Sungkyungkwan! You really grasped the aim and the function of the university very well. There are a few things to be aware of:

1) Please re-check your spelling of some words. Also, in some cases, a different word slipped in instead the one you intended to use- "dishonesty" instead of "dynasty"

2) Try to take bigger care about the structure of your sentences. Sometimes you merge two sentences into one or use wrong interpunction

Overall, good job! Have a nice day