Today I went to Seodaemun Prison where japan locked up our patriots. I went to the room where only one prisoner can fit in, it was very dark. I also went to the torture room, it was terrible to see how our patriots were tortured. The Japanese used many horrible ways to torture our patriots. I also went to the place where The Japanese killed our patriots. Beside that place, there was a poplar tree that can't grow anymore because that tree is said to hold the grudge of our patriots. But,  the tree outside of the prison is big. Our country was a colony of Japan for 36 years. I'll study well and be s talented person so our contry won't be ruled by other countries.

Great writing, very well put together, there were a few small mistakes that I fixed, Logan.