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I am Lady Jang. Today is a very bad day.
Inhyeonwanghu is the queen!! Oh my god!
I am not the queen!. So I curse the queen everyday. 
Nobody knows. Please don't speak about this.
I go to King Sukjong every night. Because I want to be Sukjong's wife!! 
But he loves Inhyeonwanghoo more than me. I'm very sad and mad.
Then, one day Sukjong called me. I went to him.
But there was poison waiting for me! Oh my God!!
King Sukjong knew I cursed the queen!!
"I don't want the poison!" I said 
But King Sukjong forced me to drink it!!
"I am the crown prince's mother!" I said
But now I am dead.
Great short story, I am glad to see you be creative. I think there was maybe 1 or 2 mistakes, good stuff. Next time when you write a short story try and include some more information like, I went to see the king in Hamneongjeon, where he slept.. Something like that would be good.Logan :) |