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 [RE]Changgyeong palace

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Logan

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10-05-20

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I am Lady Jang. Today is a very bad day.

Inhyeonwanghu is the queen!! Oh my god!

I am not the queen!. So I curse the queen everyday.

Nobody knows. Please don't speak about this.

I go to King Sukjong every night. Because I want to be Sukjong's wife!!

But he loves Inhyeonwanghoo more than me. I'm very sad and mad.

Then, one day Sukjong called me. I went to him.

But there was poison waiting for me! Oh my God!!

King Sukjong knew I cursed the queen!!

"I don't want the poison!" I said

But King Sukjong forced me to drink it!!

"I am the crown prince's mother!" I said

But now I am dead.

 

Great short story, I am glad to see you be creative.  I think there was maybe 1 or 2 mistakes, good stuff.  Next time when you write a short story try and include some more information like, I went to see the king in Hamneongjeon, where he slept.. Something like that would be good.Logan :)

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