Today I went to Gyeongun Palace.There are many things to look at in Gyeongun Palace. The first thing I saw was Daehanmun. Daehanmun is the main gate where people enter Gyeongun Palace.

Seokeodang was the Place that had a very sad story. Queen Inmok was locked in Seokodang for 10 years by the order of Prince Gwanghae. 

Hamnyeongjeon was the palace were Gojong drank coffee. This palace was Jeonggwangheon, it was a special place because it has western architecture design. When coffee came in to Korea King Gojong and his officials drank coffee in one shot because they didn't know how to drink coffee. There are many more stories about Gyeongun palace. There were many beautiful places that I saw today. I want go there again. 

 

Good job, I fixed a few sentences, remember not to use "the" too much, and to use BIG LETTERS for important words like people's name and places, good work!