The clothes were all very fancy, and they were embroidered with golden dragons and phoenixes. The king's clothes were red with golden dragons, and the crown prince's clothes were purple with golden dragons. The queen's clothes were in many colors, mostly blue, with phoenixes on them.

   The queen's clothes, were the prettiest, so I want to wear them before I get old. I wish I was the queen of Joseon. Queens did not study as much as kings, so the queen could play in the royal garden while the king studied all day.

   The kings and the crown princes of Joseon had to study all day. I pity them. I think the queen is the luckiest one in the royal family.

Great work, almost perfect, just we say and spell the word PHOENIX/ES