Hello,everyone.

I'm Jack. Today I went to Seodamun Prison History Hall.

I feel like telling you about the Korean independence movement.

One of the most famous resistance movements was the March 1st movement.

33 leaders declared Korea's independence at Pagoda park in 1919.

More than two million people joined and shouted," Dae Han Min Guk Man Se"

Many people were arrested and put in prison. Many patriots died in the prison.

But they didn't give up. They also set up a provisonal government in Shanghai.

Korea finally won back its independence in 1945.

I think that many patriots had a mind that loved their country.

We should keep our country strong and preserve it forever.

Now that Korea is my country, I should have a sense of ownership and responsibilty.  I respect many patriots who tried to keep our country safe and strong. I won't forget their struggles.

great work, nice writing, remember to try and maybe include some information about the different things that you saw, and maybe some famous patriots,