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 [RE]No, no it\'s just a bias!

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Logan

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10-06-03

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Dear, Prince Gwanghae,

    Every weekend in Gyeongun Palace, lots of people walk around and see many beautiful bulidings. Do you remember you locked your stepmother Inmok in Seokeodang. When people hear about this, they talk badly about you. How does the king lock his stepmother in a building? They might think like this. However, I claimed that you are a good king.

  At that time, Joseon dynasty was in confusion because of the Imjin war. Cheong China became more powerful, and Meong China lost it's authority, that is right, isn't it? Then, you did utility diplomacy between them. But, people did not know your achievements, and that caused the invasion of Cheong China during Injo' s time. Your idea was not that.

  I claim again, that you're a good,caring king, but most students believe you were an undutifulness king, I wish people would know you were a great king, and I want to break their bias, too. No more bias for Prince Gwanghae! I hope it really do comes true.. 

     From, Lucy Park.

                                       Lucy, this was an a really EXCELLENT essay.  I am very happy to see you write something that was different from what everyone else thought, you wrote a fantastic argument and talked with confidence

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