Seodaemun Prison History Hall is the place where the Japanese imprisoned Korea's freedom fighters. Yu Gwan-sun, the famous female freedom fighter, died in this prison at the age of 18. I really hated the torture room because I didn't want to think about the dreadful things that the Japanese did to the prisoners. I think the Japanese were so cold-hearted. Nevertheless, I am very thankful of my ancestors because I can live in Korea safely thanks to their sacrifice. We would still be suffering because of the Japanese if it weren't for Kim Gu, Ahn Ik-tae, Yu Gwan-sun, and all the other freedom fighters. Let's all pray silently for Korea's heroes.

Great writing, I can really see that you care, next time remember to write a little bit about what you learnt whilst at the place, but of course include how you feel