Today, we went to Seodaemun Prison History Hall. First we went and saw the'Prison Building'. When I saw it , it was ridiculous. I was surprised that the Japanese tortured us to stop 'Independence movements'. Those Japanese people were as cruel as hungry wolves that wanted meat. So I thought we need to make Korea stronger.

Also, we went to the 'Execution Building'. We saw two poplar trees growing on either side, that are about the same age.  The poplar  outside of the wall was thick and tall, but the poplar inside was as skinny as bone and smaller than the other poplar. People say it is because it saw a lot of people die, about two thousand.

When I saw Seodaemun Prison History Hall, it made me love Korea more and be thankful for my ancestors. If I become president, I will make Korea stronger and never start a war.

Great work, good explanations, only a few errors here in there,