In Seodaemun Prison,  I felt scared and had an angry feeling, but I think the Japanese thought that it wasn't too serious. If we make colony of one country and that colony's people don't obey, we will make them obey us. We can understand Japanese when we make a colony, but the important thing is that the Japanese tortured and killed Koreans.

 We saw jails, a hanging room, and torture rooms. Prisoners were tortured by Japanese soldiers. I can realize some things that the Japanese did to Koreans. We can now live thanks to those patriots.

I thought the Japanese were just bad. But now, I think we can't think that the Japanese are bad. They are people, so they can think about those things. They think they were just doing the right thing. Well, I wrote 'right' to tell that they did very bad things. So we can think by two ways.

FANTASTIC.  I am very happy with how you wrote your essay and were able to write it without "bias" so you could think about both sides, even if people know that one did something bad, maybe they didn't know or didn't care, so FANTASTIC JOB!!!!