Today we went to Seodaemun Prison Hall. Last time when I went  here it was a terrible day because of the cruel torture. It was a prison where the Japanese imprisoned many patriots amd other freedom fighters. We saw the torture room, it was very scary and cruel. I wonder how the patriots survived the terrible torture. We saw the trial, but the all of the judges were Japanese so the trials were unfair. We saw the prison cells where the patriots lived. They were very small without fresh water, air, and food. There was an execution building for executing people. I thought the Japanese did cruel things to us. I also thought our ancestors had patriotic minds.

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