Last Saturday we went to Namsan Hanok Village. Our ancestors from the Joseon Dynasty lived in Hanok. Hanok are made of wood, paper, rock, clay, soil, and straw. Hanok don't use nails so we can easily move and rebuild them. Also, hanok make winter warm and summer cool beacause of the way they are built. Hanok have four kinds of rooms: Haengnangchae is where servants lived, byeolchae is where married women lived,  anchae is where women lived, and sarangchae is where men lived. Many people think apartments are better, but if you consider the good parts it can overwhelm the apartment's good parts. Bad part of Hanoks are minor too. So I think Hanok should be proved better than apartments. 

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I think the same as you hanok are better than apartments