<The Museum of Natural History>

    Today, I went to the Museum of Natural History. I learned about the dinosaurs and the universe. It was very fun and also scary when I saw many dinosaurs on the second floor. The most impressive one was Tyrannosaurus, because it looked like it was almost going to eat me.

    I knew that the universe was born about 15 billion years ago during the Big Bang. And there are 8 planets because the 9th planet, Pluto, was demoted by scientists because it's too small and it doesn't revolve around the Sun. And also, I was surprised by the fact that the Earth might be eaten by the Sun because the Sun is getting bigger and bigger. I think we should find another planet that has oxygen and water like the Earth.

    I was very excited today because I am very interesting about history. I will read books about dinosaurs and the universe when I arrive home.

Hi-Excellent work, great information, great sentences and very enjoyable to read, I fixed a few mistakes here and there, and also remember that Pluto does revolve around the sun, it is no longer a planet only because of its size and volume, Great