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[RE]Gyeongbokgung |
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19-01-16 |
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Hello! A nice, passionate introduction of the main palace of Joseon! I would just add these small recommendations: 1) Try to be a bit more detailed about certain topics or building- explain more about their usage, etc. 2) Please take care about certain grammar cases. For example, if you talk about the assassination of Queen Min, it would be "her ashes", not "it's ashes". Good job! |
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