It was the first day of Mari story. Today, we went to the Namsan Traditional Hanok Village. There were many traditional hanoks there. They were pretty cool. It was a very hot day, but it was fun learning about the history in English. We learned about Sarangchae and Anchae. Sarangchae was for the men and Anchae was for the women. Also, there was Jang-dok-dae in the yards. I heard that in the Jang-dok-dae, there was Go-chu-jang, Dwen-jang and kim chi. We played a speed game with my teacher and my friends. I think my explanation was good, so we got first place and 6 stickers. We also played Tu-ho for a little time. I threw about 5 sticks, but each of my sticks went in the wrong direction. After our break, we looked around a small museum. We played a spelling game with my teacher. I got 3 correct answers, but the best score was 5. I hope that tomorrow will be more fun and better than today.^^::

* Hi,

Good job! You write your sentences well, but try not to start your sentences with conjunctions (i.e. 'and'). Also, what does this sentence mean: 'It was the first day of Mari story?'