Today I learned many things at the Namsam Traditional Village. The most interesting thing that I learned about was the chamber pot. The reason why I chose the chamber pot as the most interesting thing I learned about is because I can't understand why people used the chamber pot in the room. It must have smelled more awful than a bathroom. When my mom was young, her cousins didn't know what a chamber pot was. At night, they all peed inside of a chamber pot, which was placed under the floor. However, they could probably smell it when they were sleeping. I don't think this was a good idea to leave the chamber pot in the room.

* Hi,

Great job! Try not to start your sentences with conjunctons ('but, because,' etc.), and also, try to stick to one tense (i.e. past tense). I didn't understand this sentence in context: 'When my mom was young, her cousins didn't know what a chamber pot was.' Did you mean to say: 'When my mom was young, her cousins didn't know what a bathroom was?'