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[RE]National folk museum |
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19-01-16 |
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A good, detailed essay about Joseon customs! Your sentences are complete and give a clear picture about the topic. Furthermore, you don't have many grammar mistakes. I would only like you to pay more attention about proper usage of certain verbs- for example, "Babies borned" is wrong, it should be "Babies were born". Good job! |
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