Today, I went to Changgyeong Palace. The other palaces are Deoksu Palace, Changdeok Palace, and Gyeongbok Palace.

Changgyeong Palace was changed to a zoo by the Japanese. This upsets me, and I feel a little anger for the Japanese.  Do you want to know why I'm angry?  I think that the Japanese broke our culture. Since then we have rebuilt it, but it's not the same. I want to be able to see Korea's real culture. 'Real' cultures include their ancestors's efforts. I think that we need to reserve our culture more. When I grow up, I  want to tell the world about Korean culture, and say, "Thank  you for making Korean culture shine."

"To culture..."

* Hi,

Good job! It was really interesting to hear what you had to say about Japan and Korea. I would be careful to not say things like, "I want to kill the Japanese," though. As terrible as the Japanese occupation was, it happened in the past, and you shouldn't hate them. Other than that, good job!