Today, I learned about Changgeong Palace. In the Changgeong Palace there are inner buildings and outer buildings. First the main gate is honghamoon. In the back of honghamoon you can see mangjeonjeon where celebrations or parties took place. In front of moongjeong I saw a lot of rank stones. I heard an the name of the old  bridge  is okcheangoe. Hachi was made to make monsters or ghosts go away.There is dancheong. It consists of five colors: red for fire, green for wood, black for water, white for metal and yellow .And japsang was made to help the fire ghost to not come. Today's trip was really fun and exciting.

Good job but do not use the word "and" at the beginning of every single sentence. You do not need "and" you can just start you sentence with the word.