Today I went to Gyeongun Palace. Gyeongun Palace was the house of the older brother of King Seongjong. It became the main palace of the Josen Dynasty after the Imjin war. However, the king later moved to Changdeok Palace so it was empty untill King Gojong moved there. He rebuilt it and changed the name of Joseon to Daehanjeguk. Emperor Gojong lived for 12 more years and died here. Daehanmun iis the main gate of Gyeongun Palace. SeokEoDang is the only two-story building in the palace and Inmok, the Queen Mother, was locked in there. JungHwaJeon is the building in the middle and it is the most important building because it was the place for official events. Now, I will talk about the water clock. Ja-Gyeok-Ru is water clock and Jang Yeong-Sill invented this clock. Gyeongun Palace is very unique because it has western-style buildings which are SeokJoJeon and JeongGwangHeon. I was so interested in learning about Gyeongun Palace.

Nice job! Everything looks good just be careful to insert the word "the" sometimes.