Today, I went to Gyeongun Palace. However, instead of talking about all the features, I would like to talk specifically about 3 features. One of them is JeonMyeongDang which is kind of an office where Gojong stayed and received foreign guests. Another is JeukJodang,which was used for coronation. Prince Gwanghae,Injo and sunjo came to the throne here.
Finally,there is SeokEoDang,which is the only two-story building inthe palace. Inmok the queenmother was kept here by prince Gwanghae.  Also, King Sunjo stayed here after the Imjin war,and died here.   Looking around Gyeongun Palace was good, but also made me feel a little embarassed about Daehanjeguk's history which was oppressed by Japan and other contries. However I am proud of the King's efforts to get their country back and be independent. In conclusion, we should not only regret what happened in the past,  but we should try to improve and write a better future.

* Good Job! there weren't many gramatical errors. I just couldn't understand what examctly you were tryin to say in your conclusion.