Because of our ancestros, we have freedom and can learn and speak our own language.

They had resistance demonstrations so, in 1945, our nation was independent from Japan.

 Today, I went to Seodaemun Prison. It was rainy today. My feeling was a little bad. I remembered Yu-Gwan-Sun. She was a famous female freedom fighter. In 1919, she returned to her hometown and she planned a jonint demonstratiion on the 1st of March in 1919 at the A-woo-nae Marketplace. Yu-Gwan-sun was arrested and imrisoned in Seodaemun Prison. She received harsh beatings and was tortured. She died in prison in 1920 at the age of 18. She was very young but, she had a very big loving mind for Korea. I should imitate her mind.

 Many patriots were locked up in the prison buildings. People died of hunger and disease here. They were dark, and damp with no toilets. If I was locked up in there I would probably have died only one day later... How are they in there?? I think they are very poor.

 I remember their mind and their death.

*Good Job! your grammer is very good! :)