Today I went to Deoksu Palace. The real name of Deoksu Palace is Gyeongun Palace. The name was changed by the Japanese. It is famous for its stone-wall road. It is unique because it has western styled buildings, unlike another palaces.

I learned about Daehanmun. It is a main gate of Gyeongun Palace.

I learned about Jagyeongnu, too. It is made by Jang Yeong-sil. The bell, drum, and gong installed on the clock marked the time. Jagyeongnu is made during King Sejong. I liked Jang Yeong-sil very much!!!

I also learned about King Gojong. Gojong ran away to Gyeongun Palace. Gojong changed the name to Daehan Empire. He died after 12 years in Gyeongun palace. Gojong liked drinking coffee. He drank coffee in Jeonggwangheon. At first Korean people didn't know how to drink coffee so they put the hot coffee in a small cup and drank the coffee at once. We don't do that now, do we?

I learned about Seokjojeon. It is a western building. It has a living room and bed rooms for the king and queen. I had a good day.

Good job. Just be careful with your past-tense verbs. "Knewed" is not a wrod so I changed it to "knew." Small errors are things you should watch out for. Good job though!