Seodaemun Prison History Hall was a little scary to me. When I saw the torture room, I feel something bad against the Japanese. I wanted to see the excution building but they said that we can't go inside because they have to protect it. I felt regret but it's ok. ^-^  I also learned that the prison building is T-shaped because that time there aren't many Japanese so it it's a "T" shape for few people to see all rooms in case people escape.

     Also, I went into one person's room and it was too small. Teacher said that in one room, almost 38 people lived there. They all to stand! They couldn't lie down because the room was too small to lie down.

     I'm very impressived and I admire Korea's freedom fighters and patriots. If I was born when the Korea was a colony ruled by Japan, I think I couldn't participate in the resistance demonstrations, because I would be scared.

Good job. There are a few corrections. You need to be careful with the tense that you are using. Sometimes you forget to use some words in the sentences. Read over the corrections I have made and compare it with your original. It's important also to not have any hatred against the Japanese. This is historical evidence and they no longer have hatred against Koreans and neither should we!