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A good and lively explanation of the hanok village! You really help others understand the most important features of the Joseon houses. One thing to be aware of is the integrity of sentences. For example: "There are things in the Sarangchae that are not in Anchae. It is the Bamboo wife"- the first sentence talks about more things, but the follow-up only mentions one. Overall, great job- keep writing such nice essays! |
