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Hello~ 성학 I am happy to read your essay. Thank you :D It is very good that you told your thoughts and feelings. Yes! you're right. Family Shrine was a most important place in Hanok. So, the shrine was in a good location and was built before other buildings.
After reading your essay, I could feel that you love your family. Try talking to your parents about your essay. Your parents will be impressed.
I look forward to your next essay. Have a good time at the end of the year. ☺
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