Hello~ 소은

Happy New Year!! :D

It seems like you learned about history of Joseon a lot.

I want to give the tip of presentation to you.

When you talk about the history of our country to foreigner,

they have difficulty in understanding the proper name(고유명사) of Korean history.

If you tell the meaning of proper name to them, they can be easily understood.

For example,'Gyeongbok' means 'Resplendent Happiness'.

In your essay, I can know that you've always studied hard.

However, you need to express your thoughts.

I look forward to your next essay.

Have a good time.

Bye~